Yes, one suggestion:
leave the TB and GB alone. Really.
They heat up a lot more, and much more often. You don't want the fumes of the GB and TB to mix with the ones from the Diffs. Reason:
Oil is the same, EP90, but the gearbox and TB do have higher rpm, thus higher loss, thus higher temperature (amount of oil is the same if you take into account an error factor of 2).
This higher temperature and speed lets the oil degrade different. The fumes will mix, and you will have slightly (read: unnoticable) better oil in GB and TB, but you will ruin your oil in the diffs. Though my oil in the rear diff gets very bad very often, it looks absolutely different than the bad oil from GB / TB / OD.
I do check me diff and GB/TB/OD temps on long runs (german motorways), and the diffs are warm, but I've burnt myself twice checking tb and gb...
(This is based on 2 Sem. material science at the university and experience with my series, before someone asks where I got this from. If it is different for someone, please correct me.)
Furthermore:
Take the axle breathers straight up. My front one exits left of the rad, my rear one exits in the rear left cubby box.
If you want a breather for the boxes, I'd suggest you take it straight up to the seatbox.
I like the idea with the pneumatic fittings and connections, but you dont need any. Just any tube will do (fumes at about 80degC I suppose).
Cheers,
Phil